Friday, October 7, 2016

6 6 word stories

1) Pranks gone wrong in the hood
2) Whats your return policy on rings
3) Rotten potatoes scattered through my life
4) Lost to the memory of time
5) We were happy, then he came
6)  Once a bride, Never a wife

4 comments:

  1. 6) ITS IS FUNNY 10 out of 10 would read again.

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  2. Very creative and interesting words you chose to use. Your third story confuses me. I wonder why rotten potatoes scattered the narrator's life, or what rotten potatoes represent. I think you did a decent job on using the "ice-berg effect" to write these 6 six-word stories.
    I feel I have seen the "prank" story somewhere before . . .

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  3. I enjoy the lightheartedness of each of the story. The speakers in stories 2 and 5 are honest and frank, and I find great joy in imagining these characters. The use of positive and light words also made this very pleasing and simple to read. There is definitely a lot of modern culture infused into these stories, and I especially see it in the resemblances to modern sitcoms, where marriage issues are a source of light comedic writing. Story one alludes to a meme, and it is creatively used in this collection of six word stories.

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  4. I love them so much, and especially the second! There's just so much story packed into that one, just like Hemingway's.

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